Age eight: a discovery (REmix)

By Joab_Nevo

"Our song is on!", my pa declared


and grabbed ma as he Fred Astaire'd


 


Ma Ginger'd up within a sec


and clung to the back of his neck


 


And as they swayed there on the lawn


the grey turn black, the wrinkles gone


 


 I realized, watching these teens


that radios... are time machines.


 


 


* Sooooo, I really wanted to use the child's perspsctive from the original piece, and do it in rhymes. Ended up with this pretty inconcise (and somewhat clumsy) thing. (Hee). Decided to post it anyway... If anyone feels like REmixing this further - Oh, please. Do. :)

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Age eight: a discovery (REmix)

Created: Apr 26, 2012

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