Feedback On ":)" by brooklynlenae

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brooklynlenae's record ":)", was released to the site on June 15, 2017. It's a Dialogue Tale between a hotel customer complaining about the room the customer's currently occupying to the hotel attendant. The tale has a humorous punchline. The only suggestion I can give is that maybe there can be more of a dialogue exchange. Like the customer could ask what the attendant means by "first world", along with another question like "I thought we were only one world? You mean there's more worlds in our world?" The attendant would go ahead and explain the meaning of "first world". It's educational, but also satirical. Other than that, it's a fine piece.

Created: Jun 19, 2017

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