The office visit

By Murker

“It will probably only take 30 minutes. I’ll be in and out of there. I’ll text you when I’m done.”


 


Mary took the office building elevator up to the 6th floor ready for her annual cleaning. She was slipping her phone in her back pocket by the time she got to Suite 630. She opened the door and walked in, there was a peaceful ocean and balmy beach inside.  Seagulls were perched on the sand staring at the waves. She could smell the sea air and feel a spray of water on her face.


 


“Hello Mary, we’ve been expecting you.” A strange receptionist greeted her.


 


“Oh shit, I’ve died and gone to heaven haven’t I? But this is a dentist office, so is it hell?”


 


“It’s neither. It’s Maui.”


 


“I took an elevator in L.A. and ended up in Hawaii?  And it’s all in this one suite?”


 


“Stranger things have happened.”


 


“No, no, no! This defies reality. This is impossible.”


 


“Nothing is impossible. That’s what we are here to teach you.”


 


“Oh my god, you’re aliens! I’m being abducted, aren’t I? You’re going to put a probe in me, aren’t you?”


 


“That’s not us. Those guys were perverts. We are here to help mankind. You will spread the word. Here is the message:  Dreamers create a world of possibilities so listen to the voice of unreason. And don’t forget to floss.”


 


“That’s it? My dentist could have told me that.”


 


“Sure, but does anyone listen?”


 


 


 


 


 


 


(Thanks for the challenge! This one was weird, even for me. I think my pain meds have really kicked in.) 


 


IsaacLastname commented on Challenge me? 20 hours ago ago


I challenge you to write about a character who goes to the dentist office and something unexpected happens


 


 


 

Document
The office visit

Created: Jan 19, 2015

Tags: aliens, humor, challenge collab 2015, surrealism, dentist office, hawaii

Document Media

Related Records:

A Good Book Never Can Say Goodbye  (dialogue)
A Good Book Never Can Say Goodbye (dialogue) By Murker
Treasures or Trash - A Script
Treasures or Trash - A Script By atsargirl
Report by Squog the Destroyer et al. (WWC #48)
Report by Squog the Destroyer et al. (WWC #48) By ThatGirlfromMars
Afterlife
Afterlife By Murker
Hearts Inspire Talent
Hearts Inspire Talent By Murker
VISUAL REQUEST LIST: Destination T.R.A.S.H.
VISUAL REQUEST LIST: Destination T.R.A.S.H. By Joe
Not The First (Definitely Not The Last) - WWC #54
Not The First (Definitely Not The Last) - WWC #54 By tootwofoursquare
Misdiagnosis
Misdiagnosis By Murker
The future man
The future man By VeronicaTheCurious
Wallflower Power
Wallflower Power By Murker
Soft in the Head (10mwc)
Soft in the Head (10mwc) By Murker
First message from aliens (Tiny story)
First message from aliens (Tiny story) By rhumble