the promising sun

By despi

the sudden roar of thunder,
it struck her by surprise...
and yet she should have known better,
but the lightening before it..
it was blinding.
absolutely blinding.

it was just last week that the sun -
the promising sun,
was shining down upon them.

it was just three days ago that the clouds-
those unforgiving clouds,
began to cover their light,
their innocent light.

it was just yesterday that the rain-
the painful rain,
poured over their pieces,
their left-over pieces.

it was just before that the lightening-
the desperate lightening,
blazed back a spark of hope.

it was after,
that the thunder-
the deafening thunder,
pierced through her ears.

and with that ringing sound,
her mouth was left open,
her eyes tightly shut,
it finished.

and when the silence returned,
her lips curved upwards,
her eyes carefully opened,
to see nothing more than the sun-
the promising sun.

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the promising sun

Created: Jul 27, 2010

Tags: rain, sun, lightening, clouds, thunder, awakening

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