Love (Punch) Line

By leviseyes

Love comes first,


She said.


Love Comes last,


He said.


Punch comes first! 


She said.


Love comes first!


He said.


 


Birds are pretty,


She said.


Birds are shitty,


He said.


Punch is pretty!


She said.


Birds are pretty!


He said.


 


Time for romance,


She said.


Time for nonsense,


He said.


Time for punch!


She said.


Time for romance!


He said.


 


I love you!


She said.


I love you!


He said.


I punch you?


He asked.


I love you!


She said.

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Love (Punch) Line

Created: Jan 11, 2013

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