Paddle Date Collaboration

By LiveYourDreamGirl

Hi,
so, this is my first Post on HitRECord and I am pretty excited that I just found out about this side.
I wrote this little MiniClip a long time ago, but everytime I read over it I have to smile, so I thought maybe some people here could help me make it real. I would really like to become a bigger part then just the writing part if this turns out to become a collaboration, but I don't really know how this works anyways so, I just try to stay open and am not to freaked out about posting stuff from myself online. So, yeah...I better shut up now.

SCENE

Girl, who’s dressed in complete rain clothes and boots, is standing at a cross road looking up into the sky.

Guy comes up, looks at her, smiles.

Guy
Doesn’t seem like raining today.

Girl
Just wait.

Guy
Oh come on. (he looks up into the sky) There isn’t a single cloud in the sky.

Girl
Just wait.

Guy
What makes you so sure that there gonna be rain today? The forcast doesn’t say anything about rain.

Girl
(she looks at him)
But it gonna rain.

Guy
No..

Girl
(smiling)
Just wait.

Guy
Your smile creeps me out.

Girl
I know.

Guy
You know!?

Girl
Of course…you are not the first one who tells me that. (still smiling)

Guy
Okay, you are weired!

Girl
Thanks.

Guy
THANKS!

Girl
What else shall I say? I don’t wanna be rude!

Guy looks at her confused.

Guy
Well, anyways it won’t rain today. I can tell you that.

Girl
It will.

Guy
No, it won’t.

Girl
Yes it will.

Suddenly a raindrop falls on the Guys grey suit and soaks into the clothing.

Girl (cont)
Didn’t I tell you.

Guy
But…

Suddenly it starts raining really heavily.

Girl
I told you, didn’t I? Now you’re getting wet.

Guy is already soaking wet ,looks at her angrily.

Guy
Couldn’t you have brought an umbrella!?

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Paddle Date Collaboration

Created: Jul 19, 2010

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